Monday, March 27, 2017
Year 5 Cloud Writing
While the year sixes were at water wise the year fives did some cloud writing with the other kids. Have a look at the wonderful work they managed to come up with!
Kaihono's Skydiving Story
Kaihono and the rest of Room 17 have been learning how to write about a moment in time. Here is Kaihono's exciting piece of writing.
Tuesday, March 21, 2017
NZ Writes Postcards
We have been lucky enough to have taken part in a New Zealand wide writing activity, whereby children have written a metaphor about themselves onto a postcard which will be sent this Friday to another school in New Zealand! The school we have been paired with is situated in Nelson, so we hope the children there enjoy reading them as much as we enjoyed writing them! We look forward to receiving theirs!
Ollie's Terrific Skydive
In Room 17, we were trying to create a picture in the reader's mind. This is Ollie's writing, describing a moment in time.
Ollie's Writing
Ollie's Writing
Quincy's Acrostic Poem
Quincy wrote a fantastic acrostic poem for his homework last week. He created a vivid image in the reader's mind - we felt as if we were eating it! Well done Quincy!
Tuesday, March 7, 2017
Oliva's Firework Writing
Olivia has been working on her firework writing using onomatopoeia to create a image in the reader's mind.
Sunday, March 5, 2017
Room 17 Metaphor Poem
The Year 5s spent their writing lesson today walking around the school grounds, recording the sights and sounds they could hear. This was to get their brains into figurative mode! They then came back to the classroom and wrote a Room 17 metaphor poem.
Wednesday, March 1, 2017
The Secret Lake
Jane has been focussing on using the language feature of personification. Take a look at how well she has achieved this in her paragraph about the secret lake.
Piano Exams
Emily has recently completed a piece of work about her Piano exam - she has captured her thoughts and feelings in a descriptive recount. Please enjoy.
Setting Sail
Zoe has been doing a piece of writing about setting sail on the sea and telling the story of what happened out there. Please leave her some positive feedback.
Nightmare at Sea
Leonie has done a piece of writing recently called nightmare at sea. She has worked hard to use a range of language features to capture your attention. Please read and leave her feedback!
Dirt Bikes
Here is a piece of Jackson's writing from this term. He used a picture to help him get ideas for writing. His learning was focussed on describing a picture so that the reader can imagine it in their mind.
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